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EDIT: I put the window details in, which I think helps. Also changed the picture of the wife. 

There have been a couple comments that it’s not entirely clear what Bill’s picture is showing. It is someone with a flower. Who might it be? Where is she? It might be okay that it’s a little puzzling at this point. I’ve also left out the details outside the window so we can clearly see the robot as it floats into view. That could be a cause of confusion, I might need to put the scenery back in. It’s possible the window looks too different here.

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