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EDIT: Replaced the quota idea with the simple word “MORE” to indicate the drudgery of the task.

I do have some concern that the word “quota” and the concept of the amount complete might be lost on younger readers. Bill is realizing that he has a LONG way to go before his work is done, and the day is over. It might be better to show some sort of progress bar in the middle last panel.

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4 thoughts on “The Flower – Page 3

  1. I agree that “quota” and “complete” are likely problematic for young readers.

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